tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8359568003137262343.post8911708479654594260..comments2023-08-17T03:41:30.708-05:00Comments on You Only Write So Much: Part One: Chapter OneAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00039430374304202471noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8359568003137262343.post-23472014132263395462012-08-01T19:59:54.031-05:002012-08-01T19:59:54.031-05:00Wow great chapter! keep um comin, im excited to se...Wow great chapter! keep um comin, im excited to see where it goes!<br /><br />http://thecrossbreeds.blogspot.com/ShadyLanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11180733351897465848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8359568003137262343.post-56771967982865072372012-07-10T11:24:42.745-05:002012-07-10T11:24:42.745-05:00Thanks Erika! Hope I can post the second chapter s...Thanks Erika! Hope I can post the second chapter soon! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00039430374304202471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8359568003137262343.post-46161298642453333992012-07-10T07:41:25.610-05:002012-07-10T07:41:25.610-05:00That was really good! Excited for another chapter....That was really good! Excited for another chapter. Violet and Ethan are so cute!Erikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07608515262565482813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8359568003137262343.post-92130391043931761752012-07-08T23:03:58.225-05:002012-07-08T23:03:58.225-05:00Thank you sarah! :)Thank you sarah! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00039430374304202471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8359568003137262343.post-31181032332349074862012-07-08T22:41:34.258-05:002012-07-08T22:41:34.258-05:00That was pretty good and I'm looking forward t...That was pretty good and I'm looking forward to more from you. I hope you keep writing.Sassy Sarah Readshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14475655781282809602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8359568003137262343.post-14103918060855537352012-07-08T21:07:50.796-05:002012-07-08T21:07:50.796-05:00thank you so much, I appreciate the feedback! :)thank you so much, I appreciate the feedback! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00039430374304202471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8359568003137262343.post-42424700421482664162012-07-08T20:17:28.778-05:002012-07-08T20:17:28.778-05:00I really liked it! As a first chapter it really se...I really liked it! As a first chapter it really sets up the characters well. It's got a lot of great visual detail and it totally got an emotional response from me in the beginning when you're watching V and Ethan play then I was really sad at the end. Mosty, it left me wanting to read more :) Awesome job! Keep it up!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06203956011151803531noreply@blogger.com